my English teacher thought of a way to enhance our writing skills
He ask us to write our journal twice a week
I had tried hard on it
but teacher told me that"Oh no!You should be careful with your sentenses!"
I felt hurt when i saw on my sentenses that had been underlined by my teacher with his red pen
I could felt my heart tears...
I was silence when i get my journal paper back
I know that is my failure
I know i am using broken english all over my word
I know i could not use proper english to talk overall
Jia you for me! Wish i can improve myself...
Tze Ai
